Cute or not?

So…I saw this on Pinterest (totally in love with it) and it sparked my interest in making my own banner:

This is what I came up with, but I can’t tell if it’s cute or not. I like it, but that’s because I put a lot of work into it. I’m thinking about selling them on my Etsy shop as well, but am not sure. Buyers could customize the wording and I could sell different cloth options. This one is just a basic canvas fabric. Thoughts?